Red Boathouse |
In a recent class we painted at Humarock. It was cool and very windy, so I set up beside a building and some shrubs which provided a wind block. I used my viewfinder to frame a scene which was the view to the west, across the South River toward a red boathouse on the other side. The foreground grass prevented me from seeing the water. I'm calling this as a landscape with water, but there was no water in view.
Initially, the result was somewhat disappointing and I felt the composition was the problem. I had decided to leave out the little white house on the right. By omitting it I had unbalanced what I had seen as a pretty good composition in the viewfinder. When I got the painting back into the studio, I added the white house. Voila - better. If you cover up the white house with something dark and look at the painting, you will see how the weighting was too much to the left, despite the heavy dark cedar to the right.
I also did the following things in revisiting this piece in the studio. These are the benefits of working on a semi-dry painting:
1) I scumbled a light blue over the roof planes that were on a flatter angle, lightening the value.
2) I dry-brushed some paler red over the sunny sides of the red boathouse.
Dry Grass Bristles |
I wish I had a before and after to show these changes, but I forgot to take the earlier picture.
Comments welcome.
2 comments:
Good description of landscape with water, without water in view. The viewer feels the presence of water. Thanks for the demo on dragging the grass across the darks, great technique and texture.
Thank you Jody!
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